Hi Rebekah, please listen to my comment that I left for you, just click on the link below and it should start playing for you! http://vocaroo.com/?media=vmoI0tk38Nyyrw3jJ
Rebekah's reflection: I want to write a longer story. I can do that by adding more words and think harder. I want to write words like--Hopping into the pool.
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Well done Rebekah, you have told me what it was like to go swimming. Next time you write can you use another word instead of fun?
I love your picture.
Hi Rebekah, please listen to my comment that I left for you, just click on the link below and it should start playing for you! http://vocaroo.com/?media=vmoI0tk38Nyyrw3jJ
Rebekah's reflection: I want to write a longer story. I can do that by adding more words and think harder.
I want to write words like--Hopping into the pool.
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