Monday, March 8, 2010

Lizara Makes a Star Fish















On Friday Room 8 went to the swimming pool.
We used the ladder to get in the pool. The teacher
asked Room 8 to play a tag game in the pool. We
did a star fish in the pool.

5 comments:

Miss Burne said...

Well done Lizara, I have really enjoyed reading your story.

I like how you have started your sentences in different ways. Well done.

Next time you write see if you can add more detail in your writing, tell us how you feel, what the water felt like.


Keep up the good work.

Korobeau said...

Hi Lizara,
I liked your picture because it was interesting and colourful. Your story was very cool too.

From Korobeau

Kyleigh Williams said...

Lizara,

Your picture is beautiful and your story is wonderful. You did a great job! Keep it up!

Kyleigh

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Marybeth said...

Lizara,

I love your blog! It is so pretty! I am from a college class at the University of South Alabama. Keep up the great work!

Marybeth Shanahan