This blog is a record of Miss Burne's time at Pt England School.
Hi JordenneI really like your story and the clever words that you put in it.What did it feel like brushing the horses?I would really like to go to Ambury Farm because it looks really cool.Keep up the good work.Crusader
Hi JojoIt sounds like you had a cool time at the farm with all the different animals. We like how you put together your story - good girl! We hope that you get to go to the farm again.Love youMummy and Daddy
Great reading Jordenne. lovely story!Thanks! (Mr Eames, Teacher in Wellington)
My Reflection:I think I need to speak louder so people can hear me. I also want to make my story longer.Jordenne.
Hi JordenneI like your story because the piglets have beady eyes and you talked about it.Chyna
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