At Ambury Farm the pig had a pink snout. Then
the piglets had milk from their mum. After that
we saw Bella the horse. She had long legs. Bella
had a muscly body. Next we saw the sheep. The
sheep had a white face and pink ears. After the
sheep we went to see the chickens. They had a
sharp beak and sharp claws and soft feathers.
I really like Ambury Farm because of the chicks.
6 comments:
Well done Jalen you have described the animals at the farm well.
Your right Bella the sheep does have long legs and a muscly body.
Hi Jalen
I like the way you described the animals well done. I also liked your drawing of the baby chick, VERY COOL!
from Khaias mum ♥
Hi jalen
That is a really cool picture you drew of a sheep.Mabe one day if you have time could you come to my class room 15 and teach me how to draw like that.
aaaaKeep up the great blooging can't wait to see more of the good work.Ashleigh
Hi Jalen,
Really cool picture! I like your writing too, you have described the sheep really clearly. Fantastic work! Have a great holiday!
Georgie.
Hi Jalen,
Really cool picture! I like your writing too, you have described the sheep really clearly. Fantastic work! Have a great holiday!
Georgie.
Hi Jalen,
Love the picture, it's clear and bright. I also love the story, you are getting better all the time. Great descriptions of the animals you saw too. Keep it up clever boy!
Love mummy xo
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