Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Frank Writes About The Beach

On a hot sunny day the children were making
gigantic sandcastles. It got hot and the dog
was leaping and the sea gulls were squarking.


Korobeau said...

Hi Frank,
I like your picture because it is colourful. You used lots of interesting words in your story.

from Korobeau

Arlo and Kate said...

Hey Frank,
You know what? Your drawing is fabulous. We also like your words because they explain everything.
From Arlo and Kate in Room 8 at Grey Lynn School.

Miss Walker said...

Wow Frank. I really enjoyed reading your story. I felt like I was at the beach with you. I love making sandcastles, especially really enormous ones.

Sau (mum) said...

Hi Frank , its me mum I am so proud of you. Your drawing brings me a lot of memories when we were at eastern beach. Your picture was so meaningful and colorful,so keep it up and work hard.I like your story,especially the puppy looks happy.This is a fabulous work.Thank you and well done.

frank said...

My reflection:

I have to learn to write a longer story. I like to write more words in my story by learning how to spell them.