Friday, March 26, 2010

Kefu Writes about Ambury Farm















At Ambury Farm the piglets had a pink snout and it came
up to us and it was happy. After that we went to the horse and
brushed her muscly body. After the sheep we went to see the
chickens. They had some eggs and some baby chicks.
I like Ambury Farm and one day I might take my brother.

2 comments:

Miss Burne said...

Kefu I love you picture and how you can tell the sheep is behind the fence, that is really clever.
You have some good descriptions in your story Kefu. Good job.

Anonymous said...

Kefu 's reflection: I like my story because I used intersting words like 'Pink snout '. Next time I want to write a longer story.