This blog is a record of Miss Burne's time at Pt England School.
Well done Jordon, you have painted a picture of the beach with your words!I can see the people sunbathing and the dog leaping in my mind.Your next step when writing is to see if you can write one or two more sentences. I would love to read more of your ideas.
good one jordanlove mum
Jordan, I am a student at the University of South Alabama in Dr. Strange's EDM 310 and I was told to comment on your class blog.This is a great description of the beach. This description makes me long for summer days at the beach. Great job. You can see my comments about the blog at http//mcnortonkedm310.com Thanks, Kimberly McNorton
Hi Jordan,That was a great description of the beach. I like the way you used good vocab(words). Keep up the great work in class.Vivienne
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