Thursday, March 11, 2010

Jordan Uses Word Groups To Describe The Beach

On a hot sunny day the people were jumping over
the rolling waves and the people were sunbathing.
The dog was leaping for the frisbee.


Miss Burne said...

Well done Jordon, you have painted a picture of the beach with your words!
I can see the people sunbathing and the dog leaping in my mind.

Your next step when writing is to see if you can write one or two more sentences. I would love to read more of your ideas.

mum said...

good one jordan

love mum

Anonymous said...

I am a student at the University of South Alabama in Dr. Strange's EDM 310 and I was told to comment on your class blog.This is a great description of the beach. This description makes me long for summer days at the beach. Great job. You can see my comments about the blog at http//
Kimberly McNorton

Vivienne said...

Hi Jordan,
That was a great description of the beach. I like the way you used good vocab(words). Keep up the great work in class.