Friday, March 26, 2010

Ariana Writes About Ambury Farm

At Ambury Farm the greedy piglets get milk out of their mother.
The greedy piglets had hairy backs and stumpy legs. After that
we saw Bella the horse. She
was eating the long grass.
Bella had a long nose. Next we saw
the sheep. It had curly wool
and it had short legs. It was eating
long grass. After the sheep we
went to see the chickens. Popcorn
had soft feathers and it was white.
I fed Popcorn. I really like Ambury
Farm because the piglets looked
cute and I wished I had one.


Miss Burne said...

Ariana you have written a wonderful story about the farm. I really like your picture of the cow, it really looks like the cows at Ambury Farm. Next time you write see if you can make sure your picture shows some of the animals that you write about in story.
Well done.

Ashleigh said...

Hi Ariana
I like your picture of you going to the farm.It is a really cool.

from you sisters freind Ashleigh

Sheva Hafizi's EDM310 Class Blog said...

I'm a college student in Dr. Strange's class at the University of South Alabama. You wrote a cute post about the farm. I like your descriptions. Keep up the good work. Here's a link to my blog:


Brooklyn said...

Hi Ariana,

I liked your picture that you drew at home can you make one for me.

By Broooklyn

Ariana said...

Ariana's Reflection:
I like my story because I have heaps of words in it! I also to write about