At Ambury Farm the greedy piglets get milk out of their mother.
The greedy piglets had hairy backs and stumpy legs. After that
we saw Bella the horse. She was eating the long grass.
Bella had a long nose. Next we saw the sheep. It had curly wool
and it had short legs. It was eatinglong grass. After the sheep we
went to see the chickens. Popcorn had soft feathers and it was white.
I fed Popcorn. I really like Ambury Farm because the piglets looked
cute and I wished I had one.
5 comments:
Ariana you have written a wonderful story about the farm. I really like your picture of the cow, it really looks like the cows at Ambury Farm. Next time you write see if you can make sure your picture shows some of the animals that you write about in story.
Well done.
Hi Ariana
I like your picture of you going to the farm.It is a really cool.
from you sisters freind Ashleigh
Ariana,
I'm a college student in Dr. Strange's class at the University of South Alabama. You wrote a cute post about the farm. I like your descriptions. Keep up the good work. Here's a link to my blog:
http://hafizishevaedm310.blogspot.com/
Sheva
Hi Ariana,
I liked your picture that you drew at home can you make one for me.
By Broooklyn
Ariana's Reflection:
I like my story because I have heaps of words in it! I also to write about
animals.
Ariana
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