This blog is a record of Miss Burne's time at Pt England School.
Well done Lizara, I have really enjoyed reading your story. I like how you have started your sentences in different ways. Well done. Next time you write see if you can add more detail in your writing, tell us how you feel, what the water felt like.Keep up the good work.
Hi Lizara,I liked your picture because it was interesting and colourful. Your story was very cool too.From Korobeau
Lizara,Your picture is beautiful and your story is wonderful. You did a great job! Keep it up!Kyleigh
Lizara, I love your blog! It is so pretty! I am from a college class at the University of South Alabama. Keep up the great work! Marybeth Shanahan
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Well done Lizara, I have really enjoyed reading your story.
I like how you have started your sentences in different ways. Well done.
Next time you write see if you can add more detail in your writing, tell us how you feel, what the water felt like.
Keep up the good work.
Hi Lizara,
I liked your picture because it was interesting and colourful. Your story was very cool too.
From Korobeau
Lizara,
Your picture is beautiful and your story is wonderful. You did a great job! Keep it up!
Kyleigh
Lizara,
I love your blog! It is so pretty! I am from a college class at the University of South Alabama. Keep up the great work!
Marybeth Shanahan
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