Thursday, August 26, 2010

My Baby Sister

My baby sister has straight, soft hair. She is tiny.
She is skinny.

My baby sister is in the hospital because she is sick. My
baby sister makes me happy when she smiles. I like playing
with her. When she holds my hand she loves me.

I feel happy when she smiles back to me. I feel loved when
she holds my hand. I like playing with her.

1 comment:

Room8 said...

Hi Toma

I like it when you said that your baby sister likes to hold your hand.(DJ)

I like how you have used capital letters and full stops in your writing. (Maysun)

I like how you told us what you sister looks like. (Lizara)