Sunday, May 16, 2010

Zion Has A Wheelbarrow Race


Miss Burne said...

What a great story Zion. You are getting so confident at speaking to the camera, well done.

I liked how you used the wordgroups we brainstormed in your writing. You used two, they were 'green grass' and 'laughing and giggling. Next time you write do you think you could use two more word groups in your writing?

Keep up the good work.

Zion said...

Zion's reflection:

I want to speak louder next time.