you have done a great job of recording yourself in Imovie. I like how clear you sound when you read your story.
You have written about going to the field to play wheelbarrow races. You have written two sentences by yourself, well done. Your next step is to write more. Do you think you could write two more sentences telling me more about who was with you and how you felt when you played?
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Jason
you have done a great job of recording yourself in Imovie. I like how clear you sound when you read your story.
You have written about going to the field to play wheelbarrow races. You have written two sentences by yourself, well done. Your next step is to write more. Do you think you could write two more sentences telling me more about who was with you and how you felt when you played?
Hi Jason
I agree with Miss Burne you have a lovely clear reading voice. How do you think the boys could win next time?
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