At Ambury Farm the greedy pig had floppy ears and a curly tail.
After that we went to see Bella the horse. She had a long tail
and strong legs and a long nose. Next we saw the sheep. It had
a white face and pink ears. It had soft wool. After the sheep we went to
the chickens. The chicken had a sharp beak and small legs. At Ambury
Farm I liked the horse because it was big.
3 comments:
Hello Paula. We liked your picture and your story. We enjoyed reading about all the animals. Keep up the great work.
Room 14
Malo e lelei Paula. It's good to read your writing here on your class blog. I like the way in which you describe the animals you saw. Writing this way is a good means of helping you draw the animals too. Keep up the good work Paula.
Mrs Tele'a
My Reflection:
I think I like my story because I have interesting words like Greedy pig and curly tail.
I think i need a little bit louder.
PAULA.
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