Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Taunese's Writing Test

Taunese shares her end of the year writing test.

As I reached my hand into the mysterious black box it was slimy. Then I moved my hands around the mysterious box. Miss Burne told us to use our imaginations, she was a visiting astronaut. I was pretending to be an expert scientist. We had to discover what was in the mysterious box.
(typed by teacher as written in test by Taunese)

1 comment:

Miss Burne said...

I really enjoyed your story. You have told me who, what and why in your story and have really set the scene for what is going to happen. Next year your goal could be to write a second paragraph.

Wonderful work Taunese, you should be really pleased.