tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6590118689393739059.post7060635610173741786..comments2015-02-21T20:39:10.653+13:00Comments on Miss Burne: Taunese's Writing TestPt England Blogs Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03180808682393548165noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6590118689393739059.post-82367051449424971892011-11-06T13:26:10.731+13:002011-11-06T13:26:10.731+13:00Taunese,
I really enjoyed your story. You have tol...Taunese,<br />I really enjoyed your story. You have told me who, what and why in your story and have really set the scene for what is going to happen. Next year your goal could be to write a second paragraph.<br /><br />Wonderful work Taunese, you should be really pleased.Miss Burnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07950621458493646774noreply@blogger.com