Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Sean Investigates

Seans Writing Test

I reached inside the mysterious black box, it felt like an alien’s brain. Miss Burne was a visiting astronaut and I was the expert scientist. I had to use my super duper extra brain to see what was in the mysterious black box. I had to investigate what was in there.

When I reached into the mysterious black box it was squishy and lumpy like alien’s eyeballs. I felt so anxious. It smelt so bad like an alien’s gut. Then I took my hands out and the alien’s blood was stuck together on my hand.


Tanya Williams said...

Lovely story Sean :)


Mubasshira said...

Hi Sean,

What a lovely writing sample. I really enjoyed reading it. To be honest, even I wasn't that brainy when I was a year 3. I loved the variety of words and sentences that you've have used in your writing. My favourite part of your writing was the second paragraph. Anyways, keep up the good work.

Yours Sincerely,