Friday, July 29, 2011

Simon loves Nemo

Simon has been learning how to use descriptive words to describe how people are feeling. He has also been learning how to use speech marks. He has written a story about Nemo.

Marlin was frustrated because Nemo wasn't listening. Nemo's dad said "You're in big trouble young man, you hear me". Marlin was angry. Nemo was sad because he wanted to swim to the boat. Suddenly a diver came and Nemo was screaming " Argh, daddy help me". Marlin was frightened because Nemo was getting scared and scared and scared! "I'm coming Nemo" said Marlin and the diver went away and Nemo was gone.

1 comment:

junior said...

keep up the good work it is your brother junior