Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Marilyn writes about Nemo

"You're in big trouble young man you hear me" said Marlin. Marlin was grumpy. Nemo wanted to swim to the boat. He felt frustrated with Marlin. Nemo disobeyed his father. He was irratated. He kept on swimming to the boat. When Nemo was nearly touching the boat his dad said " Don't touch the boat". He touched the boat then a diver came. Marlin was terrified. Nemo turned around he saw the diver. He screamed "Argh daddy help me". Marlin said "I'm coming Nemo, I'm coming". Nemo was trapped in the net. The diver swam back to the boat. Marlin was blown away by the water.

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