Tuesday, July 5, 2011

Eating Jam Sandwiches By Kahui

Kahui has been inspired by our sandwich eating competition. He has been working on writing an interesting introduction and trying to use more interesting words and descriptions in his writing.

Watch his movie to see how he got on. We think he has written a great story!


video

1 comment:

Miss Burne said...

I am so pleased that Dartanian did not bite off your finger!

You have tried really hard to use some clever words in your writing. I really like how you wrote lots of your story all by yourself. You are becomming an amazing writer.