Collin has written an exciting story about our blind sandwich eating competition. He has used lots of clever descriptions in his story. Listen to his movie and see.
I enjoyed listening to your creative and fun story about the Jam Sandwich. I've never eaten a sandwich with a blind fold on (or fed anyone while wearing one). I liked the metaphors you used ("newborn kitten" or biting like a "shark.")
I found your class blog when Mr. and Mrs. Burt came to a conference in Philadelphia. I got a kiwi key chain with information about Room 10 at Pt England School.
It was nice to visit the blog - as well as to learn about your school from Mrs. Burt.
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Hello Collin,
I enjoyed listening to your creative and fun story about the Jam Sandwich. I've never eaten a sandwich with a blind fold on (or fed anyone while wearing one). I liked the metaphors you used ("newborn kitten" or biting like a "shark.")
I found your class blog when Mr. and Mrs. Burt came to a conference in Philadelphia. I got a kiwi key chain with information about Room 10 at Pt England School.
It was nice to visit the blog - as well as to learn about your school from Mrs. Burt.
Keep writing!
::Bonnie Marks, California
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