Tuesday, July 26, 2011

Aaron Can Use Speech Marks

Marlin was frustated because Nemo went to the boat. Malin said "You're in big trouble young man, you hear me".

Nemo was sulking because he wanted to swim like the other fish. Suddenlya diver appeared, Nemo was terrified. Then he turned around and he saw the diver and then he screamed like this "Argh, Daddy help me!"

Marlin was terrified too and he was worried because the diver appeared. Nemo said " Help me Daddy" and Marlin went to Nemo but there was another diver. Nemo's friends were scared of the diver too. Then the stingray said " Get over here kids".

The diver caught Nemo into a net and Nemo said "oh no, Dad". The diver swam back to the boat, but Marlin went to the boat and he said Nemo, Nemo, Nemo, no".

1 comment:

Manaiakalani said...

Great job using speech marks Aaron. What a fun movie to write about too.

Mrs Burt