Marlin was feeling furious. Nemo was fuming, he wanted to touch the boat. "You're in big trouble young man, you hear me". Nemo turned around and saw a diver and the diver trapped Nemo. Nemo couldn't get out. "Daddy help me". Nemo was scared and the diver swam back to the boat. Marlin was blown away.

Simon loves Nemo

Simon has been learning how to use descriptive words to describe how people are feeling. He has also been learning how to use speech marks. He has written a story about Nemo.



















Marlin was frustrated because Nemo wasn't listening. Nemo's dad said "You're in big trouble young man, you hear me". Marlin was angry. Nemo was sad because he wanted to swim to the boat. Suddenly a diver came and Nemo was screaming " Argh, daddy help me". Marlin was frightened because Nemo was getting scared and scared and scared! "I'm coming Nemo" said Marlin and the diver went away and Nemo was gone.

Rowana Writes About Nemo

Marlin was feeling grumpy because Nemo was sulking. He was bitter and Marlin was fearfull. Marlin said "You're in big trouble young man, you hear me".

Nemo screamed "Argh" . A diver crouched behind Nemo. Nemo swam away from the diver.

Next a masked diver took a picture of Marlin. Marlin tried to go and get Nemo but Marlin was blind from the flash of the camera.

Suddenly the diver came and caught Nemo in his net. "Argh daddy help me" cried Nemo. The diver swam away.

Marilyn writes about Nemo

"You're in big trouble young man you hear me" said Marlin. Marlin was grumpy. Nemo wanted to swim to the boat. He felt frustrated with Marlin. Nemo disobeyed his father. He was irratated. He kept on swimming to the boat. When Nemo was nearly touching the boat his dad said " Don't touch the boat". He touched the boat then a diver came. Marlin was terrified. Nemo turned around he saw the diver. He screamed "Argh daddy help me". Marlin said "I'm coming Nemo, I'm coming". Nemo was trapped in the net. The diver swam back to the boat. Marlin was blown away by the water.

Aaron Can Use Speech Marks

Marlin was frustated because Nemo went to the boat. Malin said "You're in big trouble young man, you hear me".

Nemo was sulking because he wanted to swim like the other fish. Suddenlya diver appeared, Nemo was terrified. Then he turned around and he saw the diver and then he screamed like this "Argh, Daddy help me!"

Marlin was terrified too and he was worried because the diver appeared. Nemo said " Help me Daddy" and Marlin went to Nemo but there was another diver. Nemo's friends were scared of the diver too. Then the stingray said " Get over here kids".

The diver caught Nemo into a net and Nemo said "oh no, Dad". The diver swam back to the boat, but Marlin went to the boat and he said Nemo, Nemo, Nemo, no".

Maysun learns to use speech marks

Marlin was angry at Nemo because Nemo went out into the deep blue sea. Marlin said "Your in big trouble young man, you hear me". Nemo was cross at Marlin because he wanted to go swimming like the other fish. Marlin saw the diver at the back of Nemo. "Arghhh, Daddy help me" cried Nemo.

Johnlee learns to use speech marks.

"Your in big trouble young man, you hear me" said Marlin, he was angry. When Marlin saw the diver appear Nemo screamed, "Arghhhh". Nemo's friends were scared. The diver caught Nemo in the net." Daddy help me !" cried Nemo." I'm coming Nemo said Marlin". The diver swam away.

Aarons Term Two Animation

Time to wash your hands!

Sean's Hand Washing Animation

Paris Animates

Paris's Term 2 animation tells us when we need to remember to wash our hands.

Marilyn's Animation

We have been learning how to fight germs in Room 10, Marilyn's animation tells us when we need to wash our hands.

Khaia's Amimates

Khaia's Term Two animation shows when to wash your hands.
Listen and Learn.

Johnlee's Term 2 Animation

Johnlee animation this term shows when you need to wash your hands.

Fight those germs Johnlee!

Jam Sandwiches

Rowana has written about our jam eating competition.
She has been working hard at writing her story in sequence and in paragraphs.
She has done an excellent job fixing up her story so that her paragraphs make sense.

Chatterbox - Make it Better!

Chatterboxes have been pretty popular in Room Ten lately. We love them so much we thought we would make them better so that we could use them as a spelling activity during reading time.

Taunese, Collin and Khaia made this chatterbox to help with spelling. Watch their movie to see how it works.

Dantanians Handwashing animation

As part of our topic studies we have been looking at when you need to wash your hands.
Here is Dartanian's animation which shows us how to fight germs.

Lucy knows when to wash her hands!

Eating Jam Sandwiches By Kahui

Kahui has been inspired by our sandwich eating competition. He has been working on writing an interesting introduction and trying to use more interesting words and descriptions in his writing.

Watch his movie to see how he got on. We think he has written a great story!

Collins Writing Test

Colin has shared his writing from his independent writing test through Imovie.

Blind Sandwich Eating

Collin has written an exciting story about our blind sandwich eating competition. He has used lots of clever descriptions in his story. Listen to his movie and see.

Inspirational Eating

Here in Room Ten we are always looking for activities to inspire our writing. Recently we had a Silly Sandwich Eating Competition which was so much fun!

Here is the movie we made of the competition. We are busy working away in class on them and our stories will be posted on our blog soon.

We hope you enjoy the movie of our competition.