At Ambury Farm the piglets had dusty backs. After that
we saw Bella the horse. She had a long tail and long legs.
Then we brushed her. I like brushing her tail. Next we saw
the sheep. The sheep were warm. After the sheep we went
to see the chickens. They had little chicks. They had sharp beaks.
I really like Ambury Farm because I like to brush the horse.
5 comments:
Malo e lelei Tevita. We liked how you described the animals. We enjoyed reading your story. Malo
Room 14
Hi Tevita
I liked your story because it described all the animals at Ambury Farm. You are a good speller and drawer.
Hi my baby u grow up its a very nice pig haha u wish to play soccer i hope u can play my son good luck in the future an be good always.
love mum
Hi Tevita
I love your picture that you drew.I think that you are the best drawer in your glass.
Tivita's Reflection:
I think my story is cool because it is about the animals.
I can make my story longer next time!
Tivita
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