I put my hand hand in the big box. I was scared. I felt a creature. It was gooey. I said to myself "I know what that is, it is jelly and sugar too". When Miss Burne opened the box I was right and some people were wrong.
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Hi Antonia
You were very brave to put your hand into a box not knowing what was in there. Lucky it was jelly and sugar haha imagine if it was a creepy crawly or a mouse arghhhh...but that would never happen :) have fun in school Antonia.
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Hi Antonia
You were very brave to put your hand into a box not knowing what was in there. Lucky it was jelly and sugar haha imagine if it was a creepy crawly or a mouse arghhhh...but that would never happen :) have fun in school Antonia.
Khaias mummy
Hi Antonia
Good work I liked your little story you rote.
Antonia 's Reflection:
I like my story because I used many hard words ( interesting words ) and my teacher thinks it's a good story.
Antonia
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