Elizabeth has written a story about Auckland weather
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Elizabth,
I really enjoyed your recount about making a Jackson Pollock artwork. I like how you used clever words to add detail. I can really see the artwork in my head because of the words you used.
Next time you could work on re reading your work and editing.
1 comment:
Elizabth,
I really enjoyed your recount about making a Jackson Pollock artwork. I like how you used clever words to add detail. I can really see the artwork in my head because of the words you used.
Next time you could work on re reading your work and editing.
Well done.
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