Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Elizabeths Writes About The Weather

Elizabeth has written a story about Auckland weather

1 comment:

Miss Burne said...


I really enjoyed your recount about making a Jackson Pollock artwork. I like how you used clever words to add detail. I can really see the artwork in my head because of the words you used.

Next time you could work on re reading your work and editing.

Well done.