Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Collaborative Writing

Our inquiry this term is The Pt England Way and our value is respect. Room Ten have been taking part in lots of activites which require them to work together well and respect each others ideas and the way each other work. One of these activities was Collaborative Writing where the children needed to work as a team to write a story. They have shared one of the stories below.


video

A Tiger Shark is hunting for food they can smell your blood from a distance. The Tiger Shark meets a fish and it eat's the fish quickly. As the fish went down the sharks throat it was began to punch the shark . The fish punches the shark so hard that it made a gigantic hole and the fish swam away.

2 comments:

Room 10 said...

Working together is a great way to get things done. You look like you are working well together and helping each other get the work done.
Way to go Room 10. We are in Room 10 at Glenbrae School but we are Year 5 and 6 students.
Mrs Boyer and room 10 students.

Room9@Pt England School said...

Kia Ora Room 10,
We think collaborative writing is such a neat idea! We liked how descriptive your writing was. We could see in our heads, the fish punching the shark.

From Miss Lavakula and Room 9