Thursday, March 29, 2012

A Comment to Stavely At Methven Primary

Dear Stavely,

I enjoyed reading your poem because it had lots of clever sentences and I learnt that Tenzing and Edmund Hillary went all the way to the summit of Mt Everest. My Favourite part was when it said the queen has given Sir Ed a medal. I didn’t know you could get a medal for climbing a mountain. Thank you for sharing your work.

Rima, Roimata, Ezra and Omari

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