tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6590118689393739059.post7344038225369636878..comments2015-02-21T20:39:10.653+13:00Comments on Miss Burne: Elizabeths Writes About The WeatherPt England Blogs Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03180808682393548165noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6590118689393739059.post-51492829766280410402012-06-28T10:19:27.375+12:002012-06-28T10:19:27.375+12:00Elizabth,
I really enjoyed your recount about mak...Elizabth,<br /><br />I really enjoyed your recount about making a Jackson Pollock artwork. I like how you used clever words to add detail. I can really see the artwork in my head because of the words you used.<br /><br />Next time you could work on re reading your work and editing.<br /><br />Well done.Miss Burnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10345511098422993758noreply@blogger.com