This blog is a record of Miss Burne's time at Pt England School.
Jordan,what an amazing story about your weekend.I like how you started your story in an exciting way by saying you 'I ran to the living room' , it made me want to hear more!I also like how you started your sentences in different ways and did not use the same word each time.What did you like about your story Jordan? Is there anything you would like to change?
Hi Jordan,I like your movie about your weekend and enjoyed Your movie.In The weekendI like to go to the pools.From Asena In Room10
Hi Jordan, I really like your your movie about your weekend. You used good vocab (words). You were speaking clearly and you also used good expression in your movie. Some times I like to go to our aunty place because it is lots of fun. Keep up the great work in class.Vivienne
good work jordan and keep it up.cheers mum
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