tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6590118689393739059.post5842549102641826069..comments2015-02-21T20:39:10.653+13:00Comments on Miss Burne: Jordan's WeekendPt England Blogs Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03180808682393548165noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6590118689393739059.post-89393495134524467792010-08-13T10:51:11.762+12:002010-08-13T10:51:11.762+12:00good work jordan and keep it up.
cheers mumgood work jordan and keep it up.<br /><br />cheers mummumnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6590118689393739059.post-20709378275787368172010-06-15T09:04:18.115+12:002010-06-15T09:04:18.115+12:00Hi Jordan,
I really like your your movie about yo...Hi Jordan,<br /> I really like your your movie about your weekend. You used good vocab (words). You were speaking clearly and you also used good expression in your movie. Some times I like to go to our aunty place because it is lots of fun. Keep up the great work in class.<br />VivienneViviennehttp://pesviviennea.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6590118689393739059.post-75472424333063252252010-06-03T09:42:53.665+12:002010-06-03T09:42:53.665+12:00Hi Jordan,
I like your movie about your weekend
a...Hi Jordan,<br />I like your movie about your weekend <br />and enjoyed Your movie.In The weekend<br />I like to go to the pools.<br /><br /><br /><br />From Asena In Room10Asenahttp://www.pesteam2.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6590118689393739059.post-31681954369010413012010-06-02T13:50:26.490+12:002010-06-02T13:50:26.490+12:00Jordan,
what an amazing story about your weekend....Jordan,<br /><br />what an amazing story about your weekend.<br /><br />I like how you started your story in an exciting way by saying you 'I ran to the living room' , it made me want to hear more!<br /><br />I also like how you started your sentences in different ways and did not use the same word each time.<br /><br />What did you like about your story Jordan? Is there anything you would like to change?Miss Burnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07950621458493646774noreply@blogger.com