Wednesday, June 2, 2010

Rebekah Rides Her Cousins Bike

1 comment:

Miss Burne said...

Well done Rebekah, I can tell you worked hard on your story. You have told us a lot about your weekend.

Can you listen to your movie again and see if you would like to change anything?

Do you use the word 'Then' a lot at the start of your sentences?

What could you use instead of 'Then'?