What a great story Kefu. I like how you described the bubbles as shiny. Next time you write see if you can write one more sentence. Well done. Miss Burne
Hi Kefu, my name is Lauren and I am a college student at South Alabama : ) I think your picture of the bubbles is so great; you did a wonderful job! I am sure you had a lot of fun with the shiny bubbles!
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What a great story Kefu. I like how you described the bubbles as shiny.
Next time you write see if you can write one more sentence.
Well done.
Miss Burne
Hi Kefu, my name is Lauren and I am a college student at South Alabama : ) I think your picture of the bubbles is so great; you did a wonderful job! I am sure you had a lot of fun with the shiny bubbles!
Great job!
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