Friday, August 10, 2012

Our First Gold Medal by PJ

PJ has been learning how to write and send his work via the IPad. His has worked on this paragraph independently. Wonderful typing PJ!


Joseph Sullivan and Nathan Cohen were in the mens rowing, they won a gold medal. It was the 2012 London Olympic games. The deadly doouble we're at Downey Lake. .Their Powerful arms paddle their boat through the water it was a dream race.

1 comment:

Grant O'Connor said...

Hi PJ,

I liked how you have used some clever words, especially your describing words.

Hope you had fun with the Ipad.

Mr. O'Connor