We gathered together outside Mr Barks room. Then we met Mr Burt and we walked to the track.Then Mr Burt told the girls to line up, I felt nervous it was like butterflies were in my tummy.
Nine year olds had to run through the bush walk. I fell down and neally fell in the creek and I was crying, but a teacher helped me up. When I fell down I was running so fast I run like a cheetar. As I came to the finish line I heard Mr J speaking on the microphone, he was encouraging us to keep on running.I was so glad I made it.
2 comments:
Paris and Liz,
I am very impressed how well you work together to write a story. Fantastic team work. I like how you work together to come up with ideas, share the typing on the ipad and edit your work together.
What a great team.
And I liked how you described the cross country. I have often jogged through that bush walk with my dog and I could imagine it in my head from your description.
I am proud of you for keeping on going.
Mtrs Burt
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