Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Foggy Morning by Louis

Room Ten have been working on writing a successful introduction to our story.
To be successful Louis had to do the following:

*Start with a hook to get the reader interested
* Use clever words to describe
* Tell the reader who?, what?, where?, when?, why? and how?

We think Louis has written a brilliant introduction about what it was like one foggy morning.

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2 comments:

Anamei said...

Dear loise
I enjoyed your wonderful peice of writing.
From Anamei

elizabeth u said...

Hi Loise I like your story.