Paris has also written a successful introduction to her story about getting to school on a cold and foggy morning.
Remember to be successful she needed to:
*Start with a hook - Can you hear her hook at the start of her story?
* Use clever words to describe
* Tell the reader Who? What? Where? When? Why?
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Paris, you have written a really successful story. I like how when you work you check your WALT to see if you have written what has been asked of you. You are becoming an amazing writer.
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