Thursday, June 16, 2011

"Brr it's Cold "said Paris!

Paris has also written a successful introduction to her story about getting to school on a cold and foggy morning.

Remember to be successful she needed to:

*Start with a hook - Can you hear her hook at the start of her story?
* Use clever words to describe
* Tell the reader Who? What? Where? When? Why?

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1 comment:

Miss Burne said...

Paris, you have written a really successful story. I like how when you work you check your WALT to see if you have written what has been asked of you. You are becoming an amazing writer.