Sunday, May 15, 2011

Ashley writes about Assembly
















Today Room Ten went to assembly and Miss Burne was a crazy scientist because she had wacky hair. She looked funny. Miss Lavakula was in it too. She had black curly hair and she had a light brown band on her head. She was singing a song to us and Marilyn and I were clapping for Team Three.

Then it was Team Four. They were cleaning. Mr Marks had big long arms and the others had washing stuff .

Team Five was next. Team five was my favourite bit. I liked that Mrs Nua was sitting down on the chair the they put water on her hair. Then they put the pegs on her hair and tried to dry her hair. They got a leaf blower to dry her hair. It was so funnt. I liked all of the teams but team one was the best because they handed food out sandwiches, carrots, cucumbers and popcorn. I got some popcorm from Miss Wild. I like the pretend fruit on their necklaces.

21 comments:

Miss Burne said...

Ashley,

you are right I did have wacky hair!
I like how you have told me lots of detail in your story; that Miss Lavakula had a light brown band on her head.
Well done. Keep up your wonderful descriptions.

Miss Burne said...

Well done Asley,
I like how you have organised your ideas into paragraphs.
What a wonderful story - I liked team five as well.

Muatau said...

Hi Ashley,
That is a great story you wrote.How did you feel watching the five teems.

Savannah said...

To Ashley
I liked how you told me all about what happened that day.
do you think that you could tell me who were the people that you were talking about like are they your best friend's or are you just mates?
From Savannah at stonefields school

Noeramiah said...

Wow Ashley,

That is a great comment you wrote. Also it sounds like you had fun during your assembly. How did you feel about watching all five teams?

From Noeramiah at Stonefields School.

Zeb said...

that was amazing Ashley
what was another reason that you liked team 5

Chloe said...

Hi Ashley
amazing story about in the hall
it was some funny things keep the
great work up.

Shayne said...

Hey Ashley

you are right that was a really wacky assembly, I liked it when is was team3 turn they were really crazy.

Shayne =)

c said...

Hi Ashley
amazing story about in the hall to tell
us what were doing this team keep the great work up.

Chloe said...

Hi Ashley
great story about this team
keep the great work up

ch said...

Hi Ashley
great story about in the hall
keep the great work up

paris said...

hi ashley I liked your movei so mach .From paris

Aneisha said...

Hi Ashley,
Your writing about all the teams was a bit funny. I wish I was there,but I had to go some where else.

From:Aneisha

taunese said...

Hi ashley
i enjoy your movei. From taunese

ASHLEY said...

HI ASHLEY
ILIKED YOUR MOVEI. FROM ASHLEY

aneisha said...

Hi ashley
I liked your movie about teacher day
My teacher dressd. From aneisha

ANEISHA said...

HI ASHLEY
ITS ME ANEISHA I LIKED YOUR MOVIE.
FROM ANEISHA

DOMMINQE said...

Hi ashley
I LIKED YOUR MOVIE SO MUCH.
FROM DOMMINQE

khaia said...

hi ashley
i liked your movie so much i liked
it it was really cool. from khaia

khaia said...

Hi ashley
I liked your storie it is so awsome
you did a hook It was so amazing
to look at. from


khaia

Khaia said...

Hi Ashley,
It is khaia your movie was amazing and pretty funny story.from Khaia