Monday, March 28, 2011

Making Playdough By Dartanian

Dartanian has been working hard on his recount about playdough.
He wanted to begin his story with an interesting hook to keep the
reader/ listener interested and he also wanted to include in his introduction
elements of 'who, what, where, when, why and how'.
Watch his movie to see how he did and what he likes about his work.

video

3 comments:

Zeb said...

Well done with your reading Dartanian. It's hard to look at the camera when you're reading, isn't it?
I thought you read really well.
From zeb at stonefieids school

lee said...

I have made play dough before.

Seema Prakash said...

Hi Dartanian
Your voice is loud and clear and you speak in a smooth pattern. You are able to recognize the full stop and yes making play-dough is interesting. You are not shy in front of the camera. That's a very good start.