Tuesday, March 29, 2011


Louis has also been reworking the beginning of his story about making playdough.
His goal was to begin his story with an interesting hook and to include in the introduction elements of 'who, what, where, when, why and how'.
Watch his movie to see how he did and what he likes about his introduction and his first paragraph.

Click here Work from Louis in 2010.


Anonymous said...

Hi Louise. I love how you used the word Ecstatic in your sentence. Very clever. Keep up the great work!

Khaias mum

S Creedy said...

Hi Louis
I loved the way you described the colour too. Fantastic "hook".

Seema Prakash said...

Hi Louis
I am impressed how you are able to describe the playdough activity. Interesting sentence stucture