The term started with assembly which introduced the topic for the term. Jessica has written a recount about this assembly. To be successful in her writing she needed to tell the reader/listener who was at assembly, what they were doing, where they were and why they were there. Listen to her movie and see if she succeeded.
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Jessica you have been successful in telling the reader who, what, where, when, why and how. I really like how you wrote " flicking his hair". Great job.
Next step is to check if you should write "were" or "was". Re read it and see if it sounds right.
Wow!,Jessica you gave me a lot of information about reading.
Keep it up.
By Lisiate
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