Sunday, October 30, 2011

Introducing "Outta This World"

The term started with assembly which introduced the topic for the term. Jessica has written a recount about this assembly. To be successful in her writing she needed to tell the reader/listener who was at assembly, what they were doing, where they were and why they were there. Listen to her movie and see if she succeeded.


video

2 comments:

Miss Burne said...

Jessica you have been successful in telling the reader who, what, where, when, why and how. I really like how you wrote " flicking his hair". Great job.

Next step is to check if you should write "were" or "was". Re read it and see if it sounds right.

Lisiate Lotoi lLaione Folauola said...

Wow!,Jessica you gave me a lot of information about reading.
Keep it up.

By Lisiate