Alizhay has recorded her first story in imovie to share on our blog. It is a character description of Violet from Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Please leave her a comment.
Hi Alizhay, I really enjoyed your story because it made me smile and it had lots of detail.You used clever words.I learn how to right a good story.To make your work even better maybe next time you could.I didn,t know you can do it.Did you know it was so so fun,funny and cool.Keep up the great work.Tank you for sharing your work.
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Hi Alizhay,
I really enjoyed your story and I am so impressed with how you recorded your story in imovie to share with the world. Well done.
Hi Alizhay,
I really enjoyed your story because it made me smile and it had lots of detail.You used clever words.I learn how to right a good story.To make your work even better maybe next time you could.I didn,t know you can do it.Did you know it was so so fun,funny and cool.Keep up the great work.Tank you for sharing your work.
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