Friday, December 7, 2012

Charlie Bucket By PJ

1 comment:

Miss Szymanik said...


This is such a great story about Charlie Bucket, you have done an excellent job describing him. I really like how you used the word generous to describe Charlie, because even though he was starving he shared his birthday chocolate with his whole family.

I really enjoyed reading Charlie and the Chocolate Factory to you and I'm sure Miss Burne has too. It is great to see you improving every day with your writing PJ I am really proud, keep up the amazing work,

From Miss Szymanik :)