Monday, August 1, 2011

Tevita can use speech marks

Marlin felt furious and said "You're in big trouble young man, you hear me". Marlin was cross. Nemo felt jealous, he wanted to be like the other fish. The diver came behind Nemo and Marlin saw the diver behind Nemo. "I'm coming Nemo" screamed Marlin. Nemo's friends were shocked and Marlin was terrified. The diver caught Nemo in the net. Nemo said "Argh, Daddy help me" . The diver swam away with Nemo in the net.

1 comment:

Mary L said...

Hey Tevita,
Great paragrph you did I am proud of you and that you learn more so you can get brainy like your big sister me. Keep up the good work.