Friday, August 12, 2011

Maysun Enjoyed The Bledisloe Cup Test Match

Maysun has been working on his story about the Bledisloe Test Match Last Saturday Night.
He has written an introduction which begins with a hook and tells us who, what, where and when. He has also written an excellent second paragraph which tells us about a special moment in the game.
Excellent commentating Maysun!


Mis said...
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Miss Burne said...

I really enjoyed your story and I can tell you enjoyed writing and reading it out loud.
You did a wonderful job reading and I like how you fixed up your words when you read out loud.