Monday, September 20, 2010

Peh So Write About Kupe

video

3 comments:

Miss Burne said...

Pehso

you have written a great story using lots of the clever words we brainstormed.

Can you listen to your movie and tell me what you could do to sound better when you read your story?

Kellie Grandquest said...

Pehso,
I go to the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama, USA. I enjoyed listening to your story about Kupe. You made it very interesting by using great words to describe your story! Awesome job and keep it up!

Peh So said...

Peh So's reflection:

I can make my story better if I add more details to my story.

Peh So