This blog is a record of Miss Burne's time at Pt England School.
Pehsoyou have written a great story using lots of the clever words we brainstormed.Can you listen to your movie and tell me what you could do to sound better when you read your story?
Pehso,I go to the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama, USA. I enjoyed listening to your story about Kupe. You made it very interesting by using great words to describe your story! Awesome job and keep it up!
Peh So's reflection:I can make my story better if I add more details to my story. Peh So
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Pehso
you have written a great story using lots of the clever words we brainstormed.
Can you listen to your movie and tell me what you could do to sound better when you read your story?
Pehso,
I go to the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama, USA. I enjoyed listening to your story about Kupe. You made it very interesting by using great words to describe your story! Awesome job and keep it up!
Peh So's reflection:
I can make my story better if I add more details to my story.
Peh So
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